28 Aralık 2009 Pazartesi

Thesis Statement : These days, downloading mp3 for free is too popular because people prefer downloading to buy dvd or cd and they have right to do that.

Supporting Sentences :

  • Cd and dvd are expensive
  • If the cd or dvd weren't expensive, people would buy them.
  • Actually, singers and actors or actresses don't need money that is gained from cd or dvd.(Because they make money from concerts or box office.)
  • People who works for music or film companies don't take measures enough and people reach to the songs easily.
  • Watching on tv or listening on radio is not good because we cannot watch or listen whenever we want.

Opposing Sentence:

  • Even if it is expensive, people don't have to download songs or films for free. They can listen songs on the radio or wait and watch the films on tv.

1 yorum:

  1. How can you refute the opponents' idea? After you have written this, you can write your paragraph.

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